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let dogName; // complete the code
let dogBreed; // complete the code
let dogName = "Spot"; // complete the code
let dogBreed = "Dalmatian"; // complete the code

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for these two you should access the dog object by doing dog.name or dog.breed


let myCountry = "UnitedKingdom";
let myCapitalCity; // complete the code
let myCapitalCity = "London"; // complete the code

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here you should use the alternate method of accessing object data, which would be capitalCities[myCountry]

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// write code here

console.log(basketballTeam.topPlayers)

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here you are expected to sort through this list of basketballTeam.topPlayers and then print each of the players on a new line. You can do that with array methods .sort() and .forEach()

Comment thread 2-mandatory/1-recipes.js
console.log("Ingredients:");
for (let i = 0; i < recipe5.ingredients.length; i++) {
console.log(recipe5.ingredients[i]);
}

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you can avoid repeating yourself here by moving these console.log and for loop into another function which takes a recipe as an argument. e.g. function logRecipe(recipe) { ... }

Comment thread 3-extra/1-count-words.js
words.forEach((word) => {

if(string == ""){
return wordCount

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there is no need to use return when using forEach because the return value is discarded anyway (see https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Web/JavaScript/Reference/Global_Objects/Array/forEach)

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good work!

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I learned some new and interesting refactor methods.

Comment thread 2-mandatory/1-recipes.js
for (let i = 0; i < recipe1.ingredients.length; i++) {
console.log(recipe1.ingredients[i]);
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.forEch() is also the best mothod.
recipe1.ingredients.forEach(ingredient) => {
console.log(ingredient);
}

return lookup
}
console.log(createLookup(COUNTRY_CURRENCY_CODES));

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Or we can write the code as following:
function createLookup(countryCurrencyCodes) {
let currencyCodeLookup = {};

for (let countryCurrencyCode of countryCurrencyCodes) {
let countryCode = countryCurrencyCode[0];
let currencyCode = countryCurrencyCode[1];
currencyCodeLookup[countryCode] = currencyCode;
};

return currencyCodeLookup;
}

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I think your original solution is better, but this other solution is also nice and clear.

return balance;
}
}

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const MENU = {
burger: 6.5,
falafel: 7.25,
};

let cashRegister = {
orderBurger: function(balance) {
let finalBalance = balance;
let isBalanceBigEnough = balance - MENU.burger >= 0;
if (isBalanceBigEnough) {
finalBalance = balance - MENU.burger;
}
return finalBalance;
},
orderFalafel: function(balance) {
let finalBalance = balance;
let isBalanceBigEnough = balance - MENU.falafel >= 0;
if (isBalanceBigEnough) {
finalBalance = balance - MENU.falafel;
}
return finalBalance;
},
};

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I like your original solution better here too

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