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Mohamed Abdi-London9-Lovelace-HTML-CSS-Coursework-Week3-Cakes Co webpage - #420

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Volunteers: Are you marking this coursework? You can find a guide on how to mark this coursework in HOW_TO_MARK.md in the root of this repository

Your Details

  • Your Name:Mohamed Abdi
  • Your City:London 9/Lovelace
  • Your Slack Name:Mohamed Abdi

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  • Week: HTML&CSS week3

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  • What did you find hard?

  • What do you still not understand?

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  • @JDysiewicz

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pretty solid, nice @MohamedAbdi114! Good to see you using more relative units, the HTML and CSS are organised really nicely too which makes it pretty easy to review 👍

Comment thread index.html
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<section class="hero">
<article class="article">
<h1 class="welcome">Welcome</h1>
<p class="text_content">
Cakes are the inseparable parts of birthdays!
Such a sweet delicacy enhances the joy of the celebration
and makes the birthday girl or boy feel extra special and loved!
Birthday cakes and the short wordings on birthday cake
go hand in hand. A lovely birthday cake message is enough to cheer someone up
and boost their mood.
</article>
<img class="hero_img" src="image/image2.png" alt="" />
</section>

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nice semantic HTML

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<img src="image/image3.png" alt="" class="thumbnail" />
<img src="image/image4.png" alt="" class="thumbnail" />
<img src="image/image5.png" alt="" class="thumbnail" />
<img src="image/image6.png" alt="" class="thumbnail" />

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good to see you applying stuff from our talk earlier this week - as a slight note, you could rename the images to be more descriptive of what they are (e.g. cake-1.png). Something slightly bigger is that the alt text property should be completed with a brief description of the image in text, as this is what will be read out for those browsing the web via screen-reader

Comment thread style.css
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width: 12rem;
height: 12rem;
background-color:lightgray;
margin-left: 1rem;

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nice to see you using more relative units!

Comment thread style.css
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@media screen and (min-width: 540px) {
.hero_img {
height: fit-content;
}
.thumbnail {
height: 18rem;
}
}

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media queries look clean, nice

Comment thread style.css
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.footer_links {
display: flex;
justify-content: center;
gap: 1.5rem;
}

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I would move this outside the media query, that way the footer elements are nicely centered on the mobile versions too

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